I'm playing Minecraft right now.
This isn't shabby.
Needs more measures of music. Add a part B, buld to a climax, resolve, and this'll be great.
Good start though.
The song made me very tense.
But I don't think it had enough movement to justify 16 minutes of playtime.
Thanks for the review!! Very much appreciated!! I'm glad you listened to it, and gave me a good review!! You rock!!
Unusual choice for ambient noises, but it worked out alright.
It was at it's best when the guitar chimed in, and resolving the climax with a nice deeper guitar tone was very satisfying.
I want to like this.
The sound quality is very nice, and the melody is pretty good, up to a point.
The main trouble with the song is a lack of cadence. You make the listener wait too long to hear you resolve back to the tonic.
Instead of a calming affect - which the sound of the instrument was betraying - I found myself gritting my teeth.
I don't think the lack of Cadence is a problem but the song lacks another dimension which seems to slow the progression.. it either needs another guitar part and more instruments and/or a riff that pops up now and again.
I will get to work on it soon.
This is absolutely horrible.
And by horrible I mean pretty good.
My only complaint is there's a part there where you sort of mess the timing for a second. Sounds like your finger slightly missed the string or something.
Not sure what the first critic is talking about at 0:08 though. Sounds good.
Nice beat and interesting ambient sounds.
the Timmy Dope repeat was annoying though.
I'm a fan.
Of your work.
Keep it up.
I liked the arrangement, but not so much on the voice choices.
Still very good.
Have you studied musical theory?
Never studies musical theory :( kinda wanted to but sucked at reading sheet music XD violin for 9 years tho :D
Didn't really sound like a complete song, so points off for that.
But excellent composition. You are a very skilled musician.
If you aren't making money doing this, find a way to.
If i could make money off of this, that'd be pretty epic XD i just threw this together real quick in like 15 minutes, so its definitely not a complete song.
I love chiptunes, and this had a very chiptunes sound.
Also, the melody is excellent, which is what makes this whole song.
Would have liked it a little longer though, with perhaps some cooloff time after the climax.
But it was excellent anyway.
Thanks man! :D
Very good all around!
Nice arrangement, nice melody, harmony, and it's varied enough to keep my interest the whole way through.
I especially like when you bring the strings in. They sound good with the orchestra drums.
It could be improved by adding a part B though, to break up the monotony of the underlying pattern. But the arrangement is so interesting it's not that big of a deal.
I don't compose on a regular basis; so your critique's greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed listening to it as much as I do with satisfaction of the completed product. =]
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